Just as my mouth is starting to recover, I return for the serious work, which I think is code for an extraction. Bugger. I am treating myself to treats. I'm going to get Arborea Nature Addon, and I just picked up another environmental design course, this time from Cov Phillips, who has shown off some fantastic work on YouTube.
Celebration Crit
I made good progress on the celebration scene. Enough to require a critique
The dramatic depth of field makes for nice framing, except the egg house is a bit lost in the composition. I should cut out some of the top and bottom and get it closer to the rule of thirds.
I may redo the ivy or expand it across the other side of the egg. There needs to be a bit more grime on the egg, and also some more decals to add the look of a space vehicle.
The portal ring needs some breakup. Maybe even some tiny lights or a regular pattern.
Deadline is probably Tuesday, so I'm down to the final polishing.
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