It's time to get this Medium Rig finished. It's been crawling this week, but it needs to be whizzing toward the finish line; otherwise... well, you know what happens in ADHD land: abandonment sadness.
It's been a long time since I did a proper review of an ongoing design; here goes!
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| Crit it! |
Overall, I like the general layout. Mike Ward, a much-respected illustration tutor, told us to do a squint test for things like a piece's composition. It can work on a design's overall shape. I like the silhouette; it's probably what this boils down to.
I don't want to break that, but I need to make sure the surface details are more consistent. The recycled Heavy Rig docking section doesn't quite match up, so I'll make sure that the forward sections and the command section to its rear have the same style and scale of panelling.
I've used the orange superstructure frame to try to tie things together, but there are elements that are not in sympathy with the overall design. The wide orange band at the front is just a paint colour, not an indicator of a structural element. Change the colour, maybe? If so, where else might paint panels break up flow and yet compliment the yellow structure?
The read of the command section and the propulsion sections will be details areas. Not nurnies! I want these details to be really specific and functional. The propulsion system looks like a jet engine, with piping and conformal components. The Command Sections details will be more like externally mounted systems and stores. Maybe some repair drones?}
The hab module should have a few windows. They'll help establish scale. Possibly an airlock here and there.
Find a way to connect the orange bracings/structural elements with the central frame that supports the MFI ring.
The MFI needs to look like its made of small complex things -- forward field-induction panels. Cables from the central area connect to the inductor plates. At the rear are radiators.
The shield held me back. I looked at earlier rad shields and the only one that looks right is the one on the Shamrayev.
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| The Shamrayev is a larger vehicle. Maybe heavier than a rig. Design rules will be a bit different. |
Although this design predates the introduction of the MFI ring, I can see how one could be slipped into the propulsion vanes -- suddenly these look like oversized radiators. Maybe I need bigger radiators. It's a thought!