Wednesday, 15 January 2025

Winter Competition review point

 

The composition is mostly locked. I'm not building any more assets. So what's left to do?


Reflect and inflection

1. The dome wall texture is a bit mucky. I'll make it look more realistic in terms of casting patterns and stains. Maybe more lights and some garage-style shutter doors?

2. I'll put some unique decals on the two landers. Maybe I'll put some numbering on them. I might change their colour.

3. I should soften the silhouetting of the control tower and fuel tanks. They're almost black, but the tower is lighter. The tone should shift from lighter to darker, with the tower near black. I'll test that.

4. One of the lamps on the control tower is not lit, but it looks odd. I might need to make them consistent. There is not as much volumetric light being cast. I may tweak the volume fog a bit more to see if I can improve it.

5. I might darken the foreground snow bank. It has a blue cast on it to match the TT5 procedural snow.


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